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Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Shrieking Crow (The Haunting, Part 2)

Rewriting... Please read “After The Haunting, Comes…” for details.  

Posted by Magaly Guerrero at 5:13 AM
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  2. Oh my! The added twist at the end is infuriating....did the flesh eater kill Sweettooth???? XXX

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    1. We'll find out soon.A bit at the time, Daisy Bum *I couldn't help myself*

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  3. Looks like I came to catch up on blogs just right! This is awesome Mags! :)

    You're driving me mad with these cliffhangers though; and now, on top of the crows, I have to wonder about Sweet Tooth!

    Should there be a "the" in "I looked away from the Grosso"? Same with "glanced back and forthe between the Leo and Grosso"? Also, I think there should probably be an "of" in "I snapped out the trance"

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    1. Yay, my evil cliffhanger master plan is working lol

      Thanks so much for reporting the criminal typos. I might have to hire Jaws ;-)

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  5. Did the flesheater get Sweet Tooth? Is this the beginning of a special relationship with Leo Drake (great name BTW)? Are Ele and Eme becoming her protectors? Will Grosso and Jackson continue to be irritants? Why did the crow shriek? Was that a blood curdling shriek or just a shriek????

    Stayed tuned for "The Haunting - Part 3" to see where this tale of mystery and intrigue take us next!!!!!

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    1. Sometimes our hearts (and the lines we just read lol) need to give tone to the shriek...

      I LOVE your questions and commentary sooo much. Can't wait to share next week!

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  6. Me too! Can hardly wait for next week's episode .... LUV cliff hangers!

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    1. Cliffhangers keep the blood flowing and the imagination brewing ;-)

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  7. OMG! What a way to end this section. Making me hungry for the next morsel. You are such a tease! ;-)

    Oh, Stacy's painting is perfect for this. Isn't it memorizing? Hugs sweetie.

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    1. I tease because you like it ;-) Imagine how boring life would be if we just asked and got. There would be no sighing in hope, no wishing... so empty.

      And yes, there is something magical about our Stacy's crow...

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  8. Ok Magaly, we still don't know anything about these special crows? What are they to Leo? I think Ele was trying to tell them something with the berries! I really hope Sweet-Tooth isn't gone??? ;o(
    I know, I know, part 3 is coming soon ;o)
    My crow looks good on this post ;o)
    Hugs xoxox

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    1. The next episode will tell you some things about Ele and Eme. That is as much as I'll say. I know you don't want me to ruin things for you ;-)

      I had left your lovely crow out of the post at the beginning, but I couldn't stop thinking about him, and about Gina's AEDGYTH for "Berries for Sweet," I told you before, your art stays in my head when I write. I like it a lot...

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    1. Right back at you, my dearest.

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  10. Way to keep me in suspense, Magaly! Off to read part 3!

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  11. this is action filled, suspenseful and beautifully lusty. On to the next.....

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